The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
WOW!

This is an exemplar for mood and atmosphere, and some absolutely splendid writing!
Beautiful expression of thoughts. I enjoyed this.
06/05/08
Its true, an empty house cannot be a home. Very well written.
06/06/08
From the Title to the very last word - This is hauntingly beautiful and leaves an Empty whiff of nostalgia for those long gone yesteryears. Loved the briefness, especially - too many words would have ruined the beauty of its sentiment. (My opinion, of course). Loved it! Kudos!
06/09/08
WOW! this is simply amazing, the detail and the atmosphere and everything! I just loved it! ^_^
Your second paragraphs is filled with wonderful pictures.

You said so much in so few words-great job with the resigned sadness of emptiness.