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06/05/08
Wonderful descriptions--you put us right in the scene.

A few things: "Dumbwaiter" is one word when you're talking about the little elevator, and you should probably change the "you" in the last sentence to "I".

I enjoyed the nostalgic feel to this entry.
Good descriptions. I enjoyed it.
06/09/08
This has a sort of westerny feel to it, the touch of old history and yet of ahome with memories, etc. Nicely done! ^_^
06/09/08
I wish I could visit this old home... your descriptions are very good.