The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
This was very good, and I wanted so much more! I'd have loved to read about some specific instances that occurred during those 6 months, and to get to know the family member better.
06/09/08
This seems like just the beginning here! I wanted to know more. More about the characters and the house and everything! This was good though! ^_^