The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/08
Definitely out of the box! Great dialog and a fun read. Makes me reminisce (mostly fondly LOL) of my dorm years. :)
06/08/08
What a cute story (you know, for a "murder" story..LOL) Very creatively done!
06/08/08
Definitely a different take on the topic. Great dialogue and I had fun "watching" the game too!
06/08/08
Wow! This was fascinating to read. Is there such a game? It sure sounds believable, the way you told/wrote this. Excellent take on the topic. "Home Sweet Dorm" :)
Great slant on the topic.
I like the maffia tie in to the title.
06/08/08
I was wondering when the topic would come in, and your ending showed it very well. I remember my own "home" in college and my family there. Engaging reading - Nicely done!!
06/09/08
This was fast-paced, witty, realistic college voices--but I was lost! Guess I'd have to have a better understanding of the game...but it sure sounds like fun.
You definitely pulled me along in the game. This was a fun read. Nicely done.
Fun story. My family and friends have spent many hours playing Mafia.