The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
Your description of the MC's feelings in this house of pain are excellent. Good work.
06/06/08
A haunting and compelling voice that had me absolutely engaged throughout. Wonderful personification especially. VERY well done!
Praise God for victory in Him! So glad the MC was rescued from the pit. One nit-picky...I pictured a male MC until the pink walls...not sure why with fifty percent chance either way. The story was extremely compelling none-the-less. Thanks for sharing.