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06/05/08
Thanks for sharing this story straight from your heart!

FYI: You wanted "self-conscious", not "self-conscience." No big deal, though.

This was quite lovely.
06/06/08
Although a bit sad, I loved your opening sentence. I like the devotional aspect of this. Having grown up and living most of my life in the country I could relate to the "loneliness" there for children. :)