The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/08
Love the unique rhyme scheme, and the superb extended metaphor. Really nice job.
06/06/08
Unusual rhyme, but a sweet sentiment of the topic.
06/06/08
I love your rhyming pattern. Your lesson in this poem is beautifully and poetically rich. Excellent creativity for "family home" with this "Nest". I really like what you've done with this.