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06/06/08
If only I could type or write or talk - but I'm speechless from the beauty of this awesome poetic view of the family home! Utterly fantastic, and so well written, metered and rhymed. The Thoughts, the memories, the way you have switched to WHO dwells in our hearts...just magical! What more can I say? Kudos!
06/06/08
Lovely work, and I really liked the comparison between the literal walls and the walls of your heart.

A few bumps in meter along the way, and one or two forced phrases--

--but all in all, a very good poem!
06/06/08
I love the TV show "If Walls Could Talk". That title is perfect for this poem. Your words are convicting with, "Could this be what my Savior feels to dwell within my heart? -- Is He at home in comfort thereÖ." Nice work on this well-thought out poem.