The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
"This world is not my home, I'm just a-passin' through. My treasures are laid up somewhere beyond the blue. The angels beckon me from heaven's open door, and I can't feel at home in this world anymore."

Remember that old song?

Your piece instantly reminded me of it.

Space between the paragraphs would have helped in the reading, but it is nonetheless a great reminder of an eternal truth and a lovely tribute.
06/05/08
A lovely reminder and tribute. I can feel your passion.
Heavenly is definitely the home I look forward to someday!