The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
I had to read this twice, especially to grasp the reason for the all caps...Wow, very creatively done. Great job!
06/05/08
You did a fantastic job of capturing and sharing the confusion of alzheimers. Excellent writing!
06/06/08
A bit confusing but worth the effort to untangle the clutter...as it was so touching and now I understood the "looking for the attic" phase. Truly a creative piece, and the Title tells it all. Nicely done!
06/06/08
You've got all the right terminology in this, "Back Forty," "pickings." I get your title after I finished reading this. Your ending is sweet for this special story of love and commitment.
06/07/08
I enjoyed the general nostalgic tone of this, and the twist at the ending.

I was a bit confused by some switches in tense, and by the use of all caps.

This makes me want some wonderful, fresh-picked strawberries.