The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/08
I really enjoyed many of your word pictures in this, "the footsteps of the father echoes in the yard," and "Christmas…..a quickening smell of delight." Then I love the way you word this, "The arm of love is slender and fragile looking, -- And the egoistical passes by it." You are skillful with your word choices. Exquisite work on this beautiful poem.
06/07/08
Wow, I really like this. In tone, it reminds mw a bit of the last several chapters of Job--wonderfully poetic and full of fabulous imagery.