The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
So tender - with wonderful characterization. I love the personification here, and the great descriptions.
06/05/08
Oh wow! I just loved this. I like how he tried to keep quiet for the teens, too. What a fun piece. Very nice!
Laury
06/06/08
I loved this. What a great perspective for the subject! I can readily see why you're a Master.
Great and interesting reading on the subject.
06/08/08
It took me awhile to figure it out, but I really enjoyed the point of view on this. Great writing.
06/09/08
Oh this was entertaining, sweet, fun, and endearing. I fell in love with the voice, so you convinced me it was real. Great writing.
06/09/08
Oh, very good! I hope I remember this one when I do my Master Class on "personification." Excellent writing.
06/09/08
Great pov and personification - this house really "came alive".
This set the tone for me "Houses creak, groan, even whisper sometimes, but they never shout."

Your voice is unique too, thanks for an off beat entry for this topic.