The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/08
Your title captured my interest and I was trying to figure out where this would lead. Some of your poetic visual descriptions really capture what most of us think of when we're away from home, "I love my bed: Its warm kind arms --
Deeply embrace my worried form" Nice ending too. Your thought are very pleasant in this.
06/07/08
Very nice. I like that you kept it short, and that you used some advanced poetic skills (enjambment, among others). Bittersweet and well-written.
I'm a kindred spirit in your love for home and enjoyed the poem.