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06/05/08
Beautifully written.
06/05/08
Your descriptions were vivid. I felt like I was turning the pages of a photo album as I read. Good job.
06/06/08
Very well written and hits the nail on the head when it comes to The Family Home; telling it like it is. Truly a delightful and honest glimpse into the true meaning of "family home"...Kudos!
06/06/08
Your message in this creative entry is excellent. You find out what is truly important during a crisis like this. My favorite sentence is, "Home is Ruthie's laugh, and it's Paula's friendly smile"Ö then "Home is unconditional love." Nice work on this.
06/07/08
Your last three paragraphs are especially well done in this tender piece.
I like the way this is written and it really sends a clear message of what is most important, good job!
~Ree~