The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/05
You are a great writer, and you even managed to slip in the theme this time :). So now what are you going to do with the three weeks of no challenge?? You'll have to entertain us on the message boards.
06/14/05
I was a bit confused at first, until I remembered what was in the previous part. Then it was a much easier read (if I'd gone back and re-read the previous part, it would have been even easier for me lol). Nice descriptions, I especially liked the comparion of the lines and faces.
06/15/05
Great descriptive piece, and nice merging of the last topic to this one. Looking forward to more.
06/16/05
Good job. I loved the description of the town at the beginning.
Interesting and different. Like the descriptions.
06/18/05
You have some lovely descriptions. One of my favourites was, "The lines on his face showed how time had claimed him."
06/19/05
Another solid, descriptive piece of writing. Interesting how you develop your characters - the main one remaining elusive.