The Official Writing Challenge
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You are a great writer, and you even managed to slip in the theme this time :). So now what are you going to do with the three weeks of no challenge?? You'll have to entertain us on the message boards.
I was a bit confused at first, until I remembered what was in the previous part. Then it was a much easier read (if I'd gone back and re-read the previous part, it would have been even easier for me lol). Nice descriptions, I especially liked the comparion of the lines and faces.
Great descriptive piece, and nice merging of the last topic to this one. Looking forward to more.
Good job. I loved the description of the town at the beginning.
Interesting and different. Like the descriptions.
You have some lovely descriptions. One of my favourites was, "The lines on his face showed how time had claimed him."
Another solid, descriptive piece of writing. Interesting how you develop your characters - the main one remaining elusive.