The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent writing, such depth and the teaching is presented so well, great job!
~Ree~
06/05/08
"The smoking flax of faith emerges. The breath of God ignites the flame." I love that line! When all everything fails, only God can reignite the flame of love we so desperately need.
06/06/08
A sad, but beautiful, story; and made so compact that it was easily read and understood without the long, boring wordiness of details. Loved the brief, poignant memory and the lovely ending. A delightful and enjoyable read, with message delivered brilliantly intact and digested with gratefulness. Excellent job! Well done.
06/06/08
Your story is heart-breaking and yet the light that "Their child rests in Jesus' arms" shine through. What a reunion that will be. Your devotional is very well written.
06/07/08
Very sad story, and written with a gift for inducing emotional response in the reader.

I noticed some typos and tense inconsistencies, and I really think a piece this strong deserves a stronger title.

I like your lyrical format--well done.