The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
You have some incredible descriptions in this fiction piece. They have a poetic feel to them. I liked this one:

The musicians wailed a merry ditty, counterpoint to the dirge to my pent up frustration. The dance floor was divided in two, a procession of dancers flirted with the division and respectability. I remained stranded, with the dizzying twirl of temptations wrapped in festive costumes.
05/29/08
Wow.. very different take on the topic. Well done, indeed!