The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
Cute! I love the title of "bumpity bump" and how the two finally seem to be 'working together'. So glad for them! ^_^
05/29/08
Awww.. so cute.. I was always forcing my cousins into plays as a kid so I really connected.
05/30/08
Oh, this was so fun! I cringed at how a couple of things were written in the first part, but when I discovered it was the girls' writing, it was perfect. My cousins and I started a story once with sort-of-ourselves as the main characters. Fun memories.
05/31/08
Cute, so they worked out their differences by changing the romantic interest into twins, one for each of them.
05/31/08
I really enjoyed the story, illustrating how God works in children's hearts. I love how they settled their differences.
06/01/08
A creative approach, and I love the title. Blessings, Cheri
06/01/08
Fun and well written. I love the twist at the end.
06/02/08
There's a lot of good stuff in this. I especially like the girls' stage names. :) And yes, great title in light of your story.
06/02/08
Very cute! I suspected right away that we were reading something written or performed by youngsters, and I was highly amused. Actually, that was my favorite part of the entry!

Great title, sweet story.
06/03/08
I liked how they were able to come up with a compromise that allowed them both to meet the boy of their dreams in the play. Very cool.
06/04/08
Reminds me of the commraderie found in the family of "Little Women". Enjoyed the dialouge and the challenge of wits between the two cousins.
06/04/08
Cute title and a great, UNLAME story. Well done!
06/04/08
I noticed how youtied the beginning to the end with the beginning scene of the girls' play. I love the childhood imagiantion you portrayed here, it brings back memories.