The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
LOL! This is hilarious! Love the creative take and the play format of it. Great job-especially with the 'sleeves' part. Heehee! I enjoyed this! ^_^
05/29/08
Very fun! I loved the sleeve part too.
This would be a great skit for a youth group to present.
06/01/08
Good adaptation of scripture for a quick skit. The lines have a natural flow between the characters that makes this very do-able. Nice work!
06/01/08
Very talented skit crafting! Nice work! Blessings, Cheri
06/02/08
Great skit for a youth group!

I wasn't quite sure if it was long enough to fully establish a mood. Sometimes I thought it was going to be humorous, and sometimes serious. I felt a bit of dissonance, trying to figure out where you were going with this.

It's exactly what a skit should be, though--concise, entertaining, with a message. Good job!
My only complaint is that you left me wanting more! I want to see an expanded version of this skit. This was good. I liked the humor that you injected into it. Very fun.