The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/08
This is extremely well-written, and it was an interesting read as well. Thank you for sharing your Biblical knowledge and the background behind your story.
06/04/08
Very good story, and your 3rd paragraph is AWESOME!

06/04/08
A very interesting story! So much information here, and with the descriptions, it really comes alive! Great job! ^_^
The differnt POV of a character from the Bible and your skill made this short enrty a pleasure to read.

Well done, so glad Angela threw the brick for you.
Your story has outstanding description and is exceptionally well written.
A very well-written historical piece. It's easy to tell that you have done your research and know your stuff. There's no trying to fool the reader here. Very authentic. Thank you for sharing this. You have some great writing talent.