The Official Writing Challenge
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What a moving story with some emotional twists and turns in it. Is this true or fictional? Several messages in here which cry out to be shared. Well done!
Great story line, and I like the cute ending.

A few things--"Lacey" doesn't seem like an Eastern European name, and she seems already thoroughly Americanized. That just didn't ring exactly true for me.

I really liked the caring older cousin--a very sympathetic character.