The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/08
What a moving story with some emotional twists and turns in it. Is this true or fictional? Several messages in here which cry out to be shared. Well done!
06/02/08
Great story line, and I like the cute ending.

A few things--"Lacey" doesn't seem like an Eastern European name, and she seems already thoroughly Americanized. That just didn't ring exactly true for me.

I really liked the caring older cousin--a very sympathetic character.