The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/08
What a fun and inviting read...you sucked me in! JK. No vampire jokes. ;)

SEriously, you wrote this so well. I felt like I was watching the childhood scenario unfold and could have been a third party to the conversations as adults. You were able to tell this well in just 750 words. Excellent job!!
06/06/08
Very fun to read. Good job.