The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
Heehee, what a fun story! I can just imagine what a cruise like that would be like. I loved the MC's voice though, it was so practical in the face of everything. ^_^
05/29/08
Modie sounds like such a fun person to know! I bet a cruise with her would be a blast ;-) That would make a fun sequel!
I absolutely loved this!--Such tongue-in-cheek humor with so many great lines. t's a winner for me.
05/30/08
Can I sign up for the party too? Lots of fun, I enjoyed this very much. Good work.
Oh, this is one of my favorites! I loved the relationship between the two women. Amazing how many "cousins" they ended up with! Great sense of humor throughout. Kudos!