The Official Writing Challenge
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Great what you are doing, giving is a wonderful thing. I like the last line or moral of your story. What I think was missing is a little more description or detail. Keep up the good work.
~Ree~
05/29/08
You and your cousin Amy sound very wise. I had to smile at your "Amy and I don't complain--well we did at first" comment. It's great to read about the food donation part and carpooling. "Making a difference" is what it's all about.
This title caught my eye for obvious reasons. I also would have loved to get shown a little more details rather than just told the facts, but good story with a good point.
06/01/08
A story that young people could read and maybe benefit from. Keep writing.