The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
Excellent beginning. Your description of Joan is great, especially the "who taught me to mix baby oil and iodine so we could get a good tan". :) You had me wishing for a cousin like her. I liked the "walking Bible" comment about his mother, too. I loved the respect shown "Coach" after his passing. Your story is heart-warming and wonderful.
05/29/08
What an awesome tribute at the end... for both coach and his wife in different ways.
What a wonderful story, both Joan and 'Coach' sound like amazing people, you portrayed them well.
~Ree~
05/30/08
Nice tribute to your cousin and her husband.