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Topic: Cousin(s) (05/22/08)
TITLE: Richly Poor
By Ann Marie Lindenmeyer
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“Wow, smells wonderful, Mom! Can’t wait ‘til we get on the road.” Jayden filled a plate.
“I’ll say grace.” They sat at their worn-down rickety table on the two miss-matched chairs and Jayden began, “Dear Lord, I am so thankful today for such a blessing. You have answered my prayer and I finally get to meet Jacob. Thank you so much for the food you have blessed us with for this special day and thank you for my wonderful mom. We praise you every day for all you have given us and thank you for pouring your grace upon us, amen.”
“Amen,” Mom chimed in. “Jayden, I know you’re excited and with very good reason, but…” Mom trailed off and paused, “Just remember that Jacob’s life is so different from yours.”
“Aw, Mom, you’ve told me this like a gazillion times,” Jayden playfully poked at her mom for fun and they both giggled. “They’re rich, we’re poor, so what. I have everything I need right here; you, God, my friends, and my sketch pads.”
“You are such an amazing daughter,” she smiled lovingly into Jayden's deep brown eyes, seeing joy and happiness within them.
“And you are such an amazing mom, but lets eat so can we leave already!”
The car was filled with their laughter and off-tune singing as the trees and scenery whizzed by. The five-hour drive passed quicker than Jayden had imagined.
Jayden was in awe as they arrived. Stone granite columns rose from the sides of the drive and a bronze-colored gate blocked the entrance. Mom talked into a speaker to announce her presence and the gate opened. The long driveway was lined with neatly trimmed bushes that looked almost too perfect, Jayden questioned if they were even real. The drive circled in front of the estate home, stone statues of lions guarding the marbled steps to the stark white pillars gracing the front entry.
They were led into the foyer and Jayden was amazed at the mosaic tapestry before her eyes, the sparkling glass chandelier that hung from the high ceiling, and the impeccable hardwood floors that she dared not step on with her worn shoes.
As Jayden was led to the guest room, she marveled at the artwork displayed on the walls throughout, but she realized that there was something missing as she plopped herself onto the cushiony, soft bed filled with six fluffy pillows and a multi-colored quilt woven with gold trim.
It was odd. The home was beautiful and filled with ‘things’ that Jayden could only imagine having in her dreams, but it felt cold, lacking love and life within its walls.
“Jayden?” a soft-spoken male voice interrupted.
A boy Jayden’s age with dark hair and deep brown eyes like hers peeked his head through the doorway. Jayden jumped up, ran to him and hugged him with such enthusiasm she almost knocked him over.
Jayden backed away, “Oops, I’m so sorry Jacob, I just have been so excited to finally meet you, my only cousin!”
Jacob looked downward, avoiding Jayden’s gaze. “Yeah, me too,” he managed to muffle.
Jayden’s heart felt drawn to Jacob, she felt the aura of sadness that surrounded him. He glanced up, catching Jayden’s eyes, and she saw his pain. "I have my work cut out for me, Lord," she thought. "Please help me show Jacob your love so it can fill his heart with joy."
“We have 15 years to make up for, let’s go have some fun!” Jayden’s smiled flashed brightly and Jacob managed a slight smile in return.
“Wow, you’re like the sun coming out from behind the clouds after a huge rainstorm, I have just the right place to go. My parents hate it and it’s a far walk on our grounds, but I think you’ll love it!” Jayden caught a glimpse of excitement in Jacob’s face as he spoke.
Jayden grabbed her jacket and followed Jacob’s lead, this would be an interesting summer indeed, she thought.
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