The Official Writing Challenge
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God does indeed use our pets to teach us things. Nice story, well done.
This is exceedingly well written,start to finish. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
For starters, let me say that after reading dozens of entries this week, this is the first to mention a moral to the story. Aside from that, it was witty, very well written, and kept my interest from the first line to the last. Indeed, a delightful story of man's best friend, and what Man can learn from them during this bonding of love and loyal companionship between the two. Kudos!
Good story, need some 'tense' work but overall a good read.
Animals, especially dogs, I believe are a real gift from God. Having many animals in the past and now I don't know how I would feel without them. Great story. Keep writing and God bless.