The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
Great voice throughout! Good beginning and good ending:) Very well put together read! Thank you!!
Wow, your ending blew me away!
Great job!
05/24/08
Of all the entries, This Entry is probably the ONLY ENTRY that can, and will, and did - send Readers in immediate search of the Scriptures! That in itself should make you proud! Yes Indeed, I had to look up PS 40:1-3 to find the answer to the riddle. Brilliant, creative, thinking and written like a Pro. I enjoyed the "two-fold" read, your story and God's Word. Kudos!
Excellent story--plotted well and with a great ending. I particularly like the way Mother was won over.
05/25/08
Kinda cute, a little rough in parts, keep writing.
I like your subtle approach, never saying it was a kitten, just showing us.