The Official Writing Challenge
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Great voice throughout! Good beginning and good ending:) Very well put together read! Thank you!!
Wow, your ending blew me away!
Great job!
Of all the entries, This Entry is probably the ONLY ENTRY that can, and will, and did - send Readers in immediate search of the Scriptures! That in itself should make you proud! Yes Indeed, I had to look up PS 40:1-3 to find the answer to the riddle. Brilliant, creative, thinking and written like a Pro. I enjoyed the "two-fold" read, your story and God's Word. Kudos!
Excellent story--plotted well and with a great ending. I particularly like the way Mother was won over.
Kinda cute, a little rough in parts, keep writing.
I like your subtle approach, never saying it was a kitten, just showing us.