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06/13/05
A very nice comparison. Very few people get to experience that kind of childhood.
06/13/05
Thank-you for giving us a little insight into Jesus' childhood.
06/14/05
Ah...thank you for sharing this shared experience.
06/15/05
Thank you for bringing the reality of Jesus' childhood to life. Well told entry.
06/16/05
Very creative! I liked this piece.
I appreciated the flexibility of your phrasing, which averted the possibility of monotony. Question: Did you mean to imply that Jesus would have known the same wood varieties that you did? Finally, did you consider the ultimate linkage between Jesus and wood - a cross?
06/16/05
Short and very creative. The comparison gives the reader the chance to view the variety of wood that Jesus would have used and the craftsmanship of His handiwork.
06/17/05
Insightful, I agree with the comments on phases, but nicely done.
06/19/05
Well done. For me, I'd have found it easier to read if it has been separated into different paragraphs, like 'free verse'. But that's coming from quite a literary uneducated point of view. I loved this piece. Well done.