The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the reminiscing flow about different pets with bright snapshots for each. The ending, though, didn't quite work for me. I was left wondering about the overall focus and the relations of the second part of the first paragraph with the rest of the essay. I grinned at the line "Aunt Margaret was a great talker just like her sister."
I enjoyed reading about mish-mash parade of pets.
You have 'mish-mash' of a story here, a little proofreading and perhaps some kind of continuation theme throughout would greatly help your story. Keep writing and practicing.