The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/08
Such a sweet yet sad story. The cycle of life. Honey lived a full life adding a full life to your family as well.

Well done.
You tied your story together very well with the "box" as you gave us a glimpse into your pet's life.
05/26/08
Nice story and well told.
The questions moved this along at a wonderful pace and told the story. Loved how the first question came full circle. Well done!
05/27/08
Excellent use of repetition to show the passage of time.

I sometimes had a hard time keeping up with the scene changes, though.

Good job of description and characterization.