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This would make a great book! Great dialogue and pace!
This tale of an earlier day is very well told with excellent description.
Great job with the dialogue. I got a little confused on the jump from one time to another, but enjoyed this very much!
Just beautiful - love the atmosphere and the beautiful dialog and setting of this piece. I could see this expanded to book length. Wonderful.
I loved the Scottish flavor sprinkled throughout this piece. Thank you for sharing.
Touching and well done. I enjoyed the bits of history thrown in as well.
Excellent dialect! I enjoyed this very much.
This could be the beginning of a book in my opinion. I loved how I could hear them. You are good girl. Keep it up!