The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
I love seeing "both sides" of this conversation - and I am DEFINITELY looking forward to seeing the picture. Nicely done.
05/22/08
Love this ! And, oh the suspense of seeing the picture. How clever!
05/24/08
Now I'm curious, and waiting impatiently to see the picture. Chuckling here.
05/25/08
This is an intriguing little story.
05/25/08
Where's the line for the picture? Oh, OK...here I am...waiting...Wednesday seems a long way away. Funny and clever! (I have a guess what I might see.)
05/26/08
Clever use of formatting for emphasis and ease of identification.
05/26/08
Very cute and clever...I believe I know the picture you are referring to. I loved the "flash-box" line, and calling them bad humans...LOL!
05/27/08
Love the title, love the voice. Can't wait to see the picture. This was fun to read!
05/27/08
Can't wait. This was much fun. Your limited use of words adds to the suspense.
05/27/08
Very creative. Will be watching for the picture.
Thanks.
05/28/08
Oh, Ruth--I know I already commented, but I just had to come back after seeing that picture. Funniest. Picture. Ever! And you've voiced that cat perfectly. Oh, my.
05/28/08
Ditto what Jan said...LOVE the picture!
05/28/08
Very cute and funny. Love the picture.
05/28/08
ROFL! I love this, especially since I saw the picture. Wonderful job, the humor in here fits a cat just right! ^_^
05/28/08
Love, love the voice. I am not a cat person, but you've got the cat voice/personality nailed in this piece. And love the picture, too. Great job with the topic.
05/28/08
I laughed myself silly over that picture! What a wonderful addition to a wonderful story!!! Kudos many times over!!
05/28/08
You certainly managed to get inside that cat's mind! This story was hilarious. (not to mention the photo.) And cat's do get embarrassed like that. My first cat got a rubber tube stuck around her midriff, and slunk to me like a dog with a tail between her legs to ask that I remove it.
05/28/08
This was just tooo tooo funny. Love the voice of this and the picture you put on the boards. This was great!
05/29/08
I hadn't read this until after I saw the picture. Oh my goodness Ruth, you have the cat's voice absolutely perfect. I just loved the camera sequence followed by
"Bad human! Bad!
AGH! Bright light! I can’t see!"
Too too funny. This is just wonderful!

09/17/08
This was great fun, and I could feel that poor kitty's many emotions.