The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! A real tear jerker! A "five hanky" one to be exact! From the First Sentence (which you've got to admit isn't the most elite and typical run of the mill type openers) to the absolutely delightful and heart touching story. Well written and an enjoyable read! Kudos for a job well done!
Pet stories are real tear-jerkers. Our pets become part of the family and they leave prints of love on our hearts. Great story and I love the last line.
Just beautiful characterization and description - and the storytelling was wonderful. Just lovely.
"Thou shall not steal," one of the ten commandments. Well, doggies break this law always. They steal your heart. Great proof of this is in your story about Panda. I felt badly, though, when she had to be banned from your bedroom. I wonder what our Corky would do if he were forbidden to sleep on our bed...Loved this heart warming story...Helen
Hi Terri-
What an opening line! I couldn't wait to find out the rest of the story. What a precious memory!
Beautiful story! All in His timing! You have a special gift! Hugs, Rita