The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/05
Great! and good humor :)
06/13/05
I enjoyed this piece. The back story was very believable and your dialogue flowed nicely.
06/13/05
The writing is good. I don't know if men ever talk to each other like this when they are introducing God into their talk for the first time with a friend.
06/14/05
I'm still smiling...sure, the whole world needs to know just how much of a Father God can be and is to them.
06/15/05
An interesting way of introducing God into the conversation. The dialogue flowed very well.
06/15/05
Absolutely, this one gets my vote. Bravo, wonderful, thank you.
06/15/05
Great ending
I really enjoyed this and can relate to having only God as Father and never being disappointed. I rings true to me.
06/19/05
I loved the gym setting and the light note it finished on, but with a much heavier truth.
Wonderfully imaginative and entertaining. Fantastic way to "share Christ".