The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
Clever and funny. Could picture the whole scene. Well done.
05/25/08
Cute story, and vividly told. I could just picture these two little boys walking along, conversing. You made it so life-like. And I am glad for the little toad, too, as they aren't meant to be pets. Ask me. I had a salamander once. They aren't very loving!!! Helen
05/26/08
Very nice story! A good read, well done.
05/27/08
LOVE the dialect, and the atmosphere, and the entire feel of this rustic story. Superb.
You captured two little boys with your fingertips. Well done.
Nuth'n wrong with this charming entry. I was there, you did that with your words.
I could be about these little guys all day.
05/28/08
Love the dialouge in here! It's just so fun and fresh, especially these two just going along here for the story-glad the frog/toad was set free! ^_^
Dub, I wish I could hire you to do the descriptions for my entries. You're so good at it. This is a great story and if it doesn't place, then write me and I'll send the Challenge Police to see what happened!! **grin** Kudos, my friend!
Great job on the conversation between the two little boys. So very realistic you put me right in the middle. Well done Mr Dub :-)