The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
Very nice descriptions - and a great last line. I didn't even suspect the fantasy until the troll showed up. Nicely done.
05/22/08
Interesting family pet this one is—handy for lighting the grill or the gas stove.
I'd never have guessed dragon, at first.--Nice fantasy story.
Excellent mis-direction. I hadn't a clue before you mentioned horns. Loved the ending!