The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/05
Short and sweet.
06/13/05
Short but powerful.
06/13/05
Wow! A tremendous message delivered with power though succinct.
06/13/05
Impactful. Watch your tenses-lay, stare etc. need to also be in present tense.
06/14/05
Beautiful! Daddy's home indeed.Well written.
06/15/05
You've captured so much in such a short story that is well and touchingly done.
06/15/05
As said above, short and powerful...many of us have been in the same situations. Thanks for sharing this article.
06/15/05
Very moving. Touching story.
06/15/05
Excellent job! well told with a powerful truth.
How often my own children have excitedly yelled those very words! A beautiful use of the phrase.
06/19/05
What a powerful way to end it! Beautiful!
06/20/05
Short and sweet. A powerful piece, thanks for posting.