The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/08
I like this format a lot! Very powerful. I love the way you address all parties involved, remembering each one is a person loved by God. Great message for all. Well done.
I really like your approach. These are such common problems, and a little grace goes a long way, especially if all three are praying.

I did, however, find the last reference to be somewhat out of context, unless you intended God to suggest that if Jane continues on her present course that divorce might occur.
05/23/08
Congratulations, Denise, on placing 14th in your level and 37th overall. Great job!