The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this format a lot! Very powerful. I love the way you address all parties involved, remembering each one is a person loved by God. Great message for all. Well done.
I really like your approach. These are such common problems, and a little grace goes a long way, especially if all three are praying.

I did, however, find the last reference to be somewhat out of context, unless you intended God to suggest that if Jane continues on her present course that divorce might occur.
Congratulations, Denise, on placing 14th in your level and 37th overall. Great job!