The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/08
Oh wow! This is an awesome story! Very sweet and touching. I want to go read it again!
05/15/08
Very true to life and you captured the emotions well. love the message at the end. Well done!
Beautifully told. I totally empathized with your MC. What a turn around though when "her" son called your MC "Mom". Well done, lovely story. Loved the ending.
What a wonderful story and love the emotion. Perfect last paragraph.
05/20/08
I think this is my favorite story this week. I love how you revealed the emotions the mother felt - then turned the circle around for a different POV. Excellent.
Oh how wonderful. I have said I think it is a shame that we call our inlaws by name and you just confirmed how wonderful it is when we do become one big happy family.
This was so good. I am not good at titles either, but I think your title tells the story well.
05/21/08
So sweet! This is a really good one, I love that this is from one MIL's POV, yet it includes all of them. I love the interaction and the end. Great job. ^_^
05/21/08
Great perspective on the topic. Sweet and sensitive, I really enjoyed this.
05/23/08
Congratulations, RuthAnn, on placing 6th in your level and 19th overall. Great job!