The Official Writing Challenge
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What great Christian in-laws your mc was blessed with. I liked the progression you showed of their generosity.
Loved this character and loved your ending.

Actually got a bit teary at the end,,,

A true heart of gold, your MC is very blessed.
A wonderful job on MC's characterization, and a very compelling piece. Enjoyed this very much.
There is no greater blessing than in-laws who trust rather than criticize. Brian has a winner in his. Good story.
Great example of Christian love and generosity in action, and the last line says it all. Please remember to run your articles through a spellchecker, there are a few typos there.
Congratulations, Nancy, on placing 14th in your level and 23rd overall. Great job!