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05/15/08
I'm glad that Helene did ask for forgivness before she died. I loved the fact that it brought her peace. I felt sorry for Joyce to have to go through that, but good job! ^_^
05/18/08
You really captured the difficulty of a mother releasing her child. That was the hardest thing I have ever done. Rare, a son-in-law would understand his mother-in-law's feelings in this most tramatic situation.

Good writing.