The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh! I love this! These creative versions of Bible stories really make me wonder if it couldn't have been just like this! Well done.
Outstanding! I can practically see her placing her hands on her hibs and wagging her neck.

Your last lines touches home, maybe for many.

WELL DONE! I think this will receive a ribbon.
Very,very cute and written so well, it read like a chapter from a book about "Bible Stories
Made Modern."I loved it!
What fun, loved everything about it! The humor is perfect.
05/17/08
Oh, I LOVE it! I laughed HEARTILY throughout. This must have been a BLAST to write. Super job, especially, on characterization and descriptions. ADORED this!
This is awesome--so well written! I am very impressed. Bravo!
05/17/08
Oh it just gets worse and worse. :-D Once I realized what 'cruise ship' they'd be on, I laughed.
05/18/08
Funny, funny, funny! I don't know how you do it...this just killed me. I loved every line, and your narrator's witty sarcasm.
05/18/08
Awesome writing! Loved, loved this! Especially love your last line. What a perfect way to end it and so very very true!
Laury
What a hoot! You had me going for a while. Makes you wonder how those daughter-in-laws felt. I'm glad I know how the story ends. Nice job.
05/21/08
ROFL! What a hilarious way to portray these old characters! I loved the new POV and especially the end, the last lines cracked me up! ^_^
05/21/08
This was a delightful read! I just love it! You brought those characters to life in ways I've never dreamed of. Excellent! Blessings, Cheri
05/21/08
What an incredible take on the topic, and your writing is phenomenal. Creative and funny. Well done!
This was so much fun. I laughed aloud at "My husband warily eyed the chopping instrument in my hand before answering" Wonderful story, I loved the attitude of the MC. Well done, very well done indeed.

This story is definitely deserving of the "highly commended" honor bestowed upon it.

I love witty and sarcastic takes on stories like this. Very fun!
05/22/08
This story leaves me wondering if I had been the MC, would I have gotten on the boat? I sure hope so! Great job and a fun read.
05/22/08
Congratulations on your EC!!!!! Awesome writing!
05/22/08
What a fun story! It was a great take on an the actual Bible event. I can just see that happening.
How about if I just say ditto to all the above and then add Wow!
05/23/08
This was brilliant! What a creative fun idea. This deserved an EC. Congrats!