The Official Writing Challenge
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Simply wonderful! I loved the repeating lines with open arms. That say so much in that short image. Great job. ^_^
Ben, how beautiful! I hope you share this with your in-laws (I seem to recall that you're either engaged or very newly married). It's priceless.
Just lovely! Both you and your in-laws are very blessed. Thanks for sharing these sentiments.
This is sweet and says much.

Warm and welcomed is how this made me feel.
I don't use the word "precious" very often, but this is a precious poem.
I wish you could have someone hand-print it, then mat and frame it for your inlaws. As a mother-in-law, I can tell you this would be priceless and would be a treasured possession of your in-laws, KUDOS!

Mariane Holbrook
I know guys don't like to be called sweet but I can't help it. This one is really sweet and I mean in the best way.
God has blessed you with a gift. This surely will bless "her" and "them."
You are a great poet, Ben. I always enjoy your poetry, and this one makes a great gift to give to your in-laws.

I appreciate you sharing this.
After reading this I'm sure that your wife and in-laws are very blessed to have you!