The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your "mama bears" story of how the Lord works things out, even when we have our doubts.
05/16/08
I love your description of the mama bear. This is very true. I am so glad the marriage turned out well.
Laury
05/17/08
I love how this comes full circle - and what a wonderful ending.Enjoyed this.
05/17/08
There are some excellent turns of phrase here – “Jim was a package deal” and “she now bore full-grown fangs and razor-sharp claws” The maternal mother-bear instinct comes across very powerfully – I think that I would be frightened!
Well done. You did a grerat job with the two mother in law relationships, and I love the title!
05/18/08
The title is a perfect choice and the descriptions are great. Wonderful job.
05/18/08
Very good! I've been a mama bear at times, myself, so I could really relate.
Wowsers! This is sharp and to the point and well done.

Crisp and efficient with the word limit, you said much.
05/21/08
The title made me curious and it turned out to be a perfect selection for your work. You describe her in such good detail and with such good phrases that I marvel your abilities. Kudos big time, my friend!
05/21/08
Love the illustration of a "Mama Bear" that's precisely perfect! Great job, especially how it didn't turn out to be horrible in the end, I liked that there was hope, not without some bumps along the way, but it was there. Great job! ^_^