The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/08
Wow. So much depth and emotion here. The descriptions only add to the atmosphere and I enjoyed the read all the way through. This was great. Good job! ^_^
Sad. Your descriptions setting the scene and atmosphere were excellent.
05/18/08
WOW!!! This really got me. Loved the line "honor married good intentions". You painted a true picture of back woods living. Very discriptive.

I see a book here!
05/23/08
Congratulations, JoAnne, on placing 8th in your level and 21st overall. Great job!
05/24/08
The descriptions were stunningly good. I'm not a visual person, and all of my life I have skimmed over lengthy visual descriptions... UNLESS they touched my heart. Yours did. Well done.