The Official Writing Challenge
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You really brought these characters to life. I could feel Cynthia's uncertainty. I enjoyed this story. Excellent writing.
I'm glad she took him "lock, stock, and barrel." I enjoyed your story.
05/16/08
You did a very good job of showing us Cynthia's emotions. A very good read.
The repetition of your title tied this together for me.

I thought for moment the wedding wasn't going to take place-glad it did.

Your dialog was right on, you portrayer her hesitation perfectly.
I cannot imagine marrying under such harsh conditions from a future MIL. You wrote the emotions of this well.
05/21/08
I like Cynthia! and I'm glad she didn't let herself get too intimidated to simply miss out on something this special-her husband. Great job. ^_^
This was a really good draw in the reader story. Really held my interest and your characterizations were well-drawn and vivid. Excellent writing.