The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful, compassionate, loveable character is Win. I felt your great loss because of the errors of the medical profession. I'm sorry for what she lost, but so thankful for the years she blessed the lives of those around her.
Your use of repetition helped convey your sense of dispair.
It helped warn us that this wonderful gal was going to meet unhappy circumstances.

You painted a lovely picture of a loveley lady and the single tear was heartwrenching.

Well done.
05/23/08
Congratulations, Jack, on placing 11th in your level and 31st overall. Great job!