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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: In-Law(s) (05/08/08)

TITLE: They're not too bad
By dub W
05/09/08


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In-laws and outlaws and rabble of all kind
People you can lean on, I知 sure they won稚 mind
One you call mum the other by name
Little ones to bug you -- it痴 all the same.

Sometimes they say what a nice chap you can be
The next day comes scorn for stealing sweet Bea
Her sister spies on your most passionate moments
Recounts all to her papa for some nasty comments.

Her brother thinks it痴 nice to have a pal around
Even shows you his stash not so easily found
He wanted a brother; I guess you値l fit
You be the catcher, he値l loan you a mitt.

Then there痴 Aunt Bertha weathered and beat
She値l invite you tea. Be prepared for a treat
She値l wanna know your people -- who they might be
She値l examine you thoroughly, every branch of the tree.

Over the years so many in-laws you値l meet
Some will be drunks; some will be sweet
Some will think you are prince of a guy
Others will gossip and give you "the eye".

When all is done, the in-laws will be fine
Just quirky old folks; nosey sometimes
And of course they値l tell you what is right
And the things you do wrong, even at night.

But, love知 ya gotta; each every one
Their daughter you married, the race is run
So, Praise God for in-laws, the strange ones too
They値l learn to love ya -- yeah, even you.


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Verna Cole Mitchell 05/15/08
I enjoyed meeting with you in your poem all the quirky in-laws and liked your last line that hinted you, yourself, just might be a little bit quirky.
Lyn Churchyard05/19/08
I think your first line sums up the in-law situation; from both sides of the coin. I loved the line 'Others will gossip and give you "the eye".' That's what my son-in-law says his wife gives him. Nice smooth flowing poem that has lots of truth in it.

Benjamin Graber05/19/08
This one is fun. I can relate to both the enjoyable and the uncomfortable moments - they all make fun memories!
Jan Ackerson 05/19/08
Fun, quirky--love your title, and especially your last two lines. This is cute.
Debbie Wistrom05/19/08
Aunt Bertha was a treat.
You nailed many types of family here.

Thanks for the smiles.
Joy Faire Stewart05/21/08
Oh, this made me smile. Love that it includes many members of the family. Great last stanza too.
Mariane Holbrook05/21/08
Well, you're right. They're lucky to have "even you." Delightful and fun, like you, Dub!
Janice Cartwright 05/21/08
My favorite line came at the end - if we have in-laws guess what that makes us? :)
Carole Robishaw 05/21/08
Right on DUb, enjoyed this one.
Sara Harricharan 05/21/08
Cute! I like the general idea that "they're not too bad" Made me smile today-good job. ^_^
Willena Flewelling 05/21/08
Delightful, Dub... and insightful.
Joshua Janoski05/21/08
LOL. This was great. It's one of my favorites in advanced this week. I think I'm going to add it to my favorites list. It flowed nicely and gave me a good laugh. :)
Angela M. Baker-Bridge 05/21/08
You were able to describe so many personalities and situations in just a few lines - amazing. Truthful and humorous, thanks :)


   
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