The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the irony in your story and especially liked the narrator's prayer at the end.
05/17/08
There were some great lines in this piece such as “This is God’s way of not having to always be everywhere, so He can take a well-earned holiday.” I wonder if your writing isn’t a little too dark. It does in well in capturing the narrator’s frustration and the suggestion that he in turn will be just as bad is suitably comical. But it’s hard to be truly sympathetic to a narrator who quite so negative.